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ink scribbles across your skin,

flawed.

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old scars and imperfection,

next to
and under
my words.

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i wrapped my hunger around you,
blind to smudged lines
and white lies.
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:iconkillingfrost:
very well said, I like this one a lot

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"Poets, being a small, introverted group, spend a lot of time clubbing each other over obscurities."
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thank you :D

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i'll wrap my wire around your heart
and your mind.
Smashing Pumpkins
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:iconincubustrav421:
has complex that is used with simple text. I see the feeling, but enough to say ok. great job

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thank you for commenting :thumbsup:

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i'll wrap my wire around your heart
and your mind.
Smashing Pumpkins
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:iconflaminglily:
thank you.

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i'll wrap my wire around your heart
and your mind.
Smashing Pumpkins
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:icondrop-dead-gawjus:
wow...i love it...it's so simple yet it says it all

nice one

xxx
Liza

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Drop-Dead-Gawjus....x
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thank you :heart:

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The apex of contradiction.
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no prob :D

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